مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Your Life Is Not Perfect !!


الشجيبي
24-09-08, AM 01:27
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this is a poem I wrote it a few days ago
and when u read it
u gonna know what happened in this dayshttp://www.cooolgirls.com/images/smilies/04111.gif
hope u like it
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Doing better doing the best
never matter to be as the rest

Killing your self is not hard for you
cause you don't have someone to cry on you

Sitting with your friends sitting alone
it's not that different cause no one for your own

While you laugh while you smile
but all the time you try to not crin

Making bad making the worst
it's not hard to be as ghost

Being you being your self
it's not fro them it's for your life

Your life is sucks your life is nightmare
but you don't know when you gonna disappear

DONE

I want ur opinion
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c ya

-m7-
24-09-08, AM 02:06
waaaaaaaaaaw its wonderful brother
and I like this


Killing your self is not hard for you
cause you don't have someone to cry on you


thanks bro

الشجيبي
24-09-08, AM 02:10
waaaaaaaaaaw its wonderful brother
and I like this


Killing your self is not hard for you
cause you don't have someone to cry on you


thanks bro

thnxxxx 2 u sis :) !!

someone
24-09-08, PM 12:56
wo0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0w
it`s really nice n beautiful

wish u all the best

الشجيبي
24-09-08, PM 06:52
wo0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0w
it`s really nice n beautiful

wish u all the best

thnxx man :) !!
me 2 !!

الغاليه
30-09-08, AM 01:00
woooooooooooooow
i didn't know that u can write poems
it's really beautiful i like it espcailly this part



Your life is sucks your life is nightmare
but you don't know when you gonna disappear



well done bro
i want see more

الشجيبي
22-10-08, PM 02:08
woooooooooooooow
i didn't know that u can write poems
it's really beautiful i like it espcailly this part



Your life is sucks your life is nightmare
but you don't know when you gonna disappear



well done bro
i want see more

thnxxxx so much sis :) ..
n in sha ALLAh u'll c more n more ..

زهرة الربيع
22-10-08, PM 04:46
brotger
the poem is great
it have a wonderful rhyme and rhythm

well done
^_^
zahooora
:mwalat18:

الشجيبي
22-10-08, PM 08:38
brotger
the poem is great
it have a wonderful rhyme and rhythm

well done
^_^
zahooora
:mwalat18:
tnxxxx sis ..
n wait 4 the next :mwalat18: